Thursday, August 27, 2015

The Wgi Patch

Riley Brown
Mrs. Fraser
Creative Writing
27 August 2015
The WGI Patch
                The whole season has lead up to this moment.  Some of the members are getting anxious, some are getting excited for world championships.  As we all walk to down the tunnel into the University of Dayton arena we are in quite anticipation of what is going to happen when we step out on that floor.  As we get to the bottom of the steep tunnel the drumline all gathers into one big circle.  We pray for a good performance, and no matter what the score is, we pray we have fun.  After the prayer everyone is exchanging hugs with each other, congratulating them on the season.  As the seniors and the parents get emotional so does the rest of the line because we know that this is the last time that this specific line will march together.  We hear the sounds of the group preceding ours drums cease, and the cheers that follow.  We start to push the equipment on to the floor, and see the arena from the floor.  The arena is bright and the stands are packed, and the nervous excitement sets in even more.  Performing the show for that big of an audience is such a rush it is hard to remember some of the details, but the drumline did well and had fun, and that’s all that matters.
                After getting all the equipment out of the arena and back to our bus the members ecstatic.  Performing for a crowd that loves drums and cheers for everything they do, was one of the best experiences of our lives, and even though we still have to go through the hassle of trying to pack every marimba, vibraphone, and xylophone on to one bus we all know that these moments are special, and will not be forgotten. 
                The fun is not over though, after packing everything up we go back for the finals retreat, which is where every drumline that participated gets together and waits to be called out on to the floor, for the second time, to receive their placement and plaque.  As we stand in a line at the beginning of the tunnel we went down not a few hours before the mood is all changed, everyone is excited and happy and ready to get down the tunnel and walk out on the floor again.  As our name is called we all walk down the tunnel together until we get to the same spot where we had our prayer, and continue on to the floor.  The arena is dark now, with two spotlights going around the arena, occasionally shinning on some of us, as we walk to the place where the drumline stands in a single file line with all the other drumlines to receive their placement.  The process of building up every groups score before actually saying it takes a long time, especially with fifteen groups that made it to finals, but once the announcer says ninth place everyone perks up because that’s what we had got the year before.  We get excited now because the announcer has said Kickapoo got eighth in the world. Everyone is happy we at least did better than the last year and our captains go up and receive the award. 

                After we get back we all get finalist patches to put on jackets or whatever we want, and every time I see mine I’m happy I got experience those amazing times.  It was one of the best experiences of my life.     

6 comments:

  1. I absolutely love the drum line. It is interesting to hear how someone who actually plays in it, feels about it. I never knew how much hard work and emotion goes into the drum line. This was very interesting and I learned a lot. Thank You.

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  2. Hello, Riley! I can definitely relate with the having to stuff instruments onto a bus. When we have Orchestra contests, it's a huge hassle to pack the basses and cellos. Love that you remember the spot you prayed in, the first time. I often walk or drive past a place that reminds me of something dear to my heart. Eighth in the World is a huge deal! Congratulations! I'm very proud of our Kickapoo drumline and I look forward to seeing what great things they do in the future. Thanks for sharing!

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  3. I really enjoyed reading your story, I can tell you put a lot of thought into it and it is well put together. Definitely was exciting to read, I liked how descriptive you were about the place and feelings it brought out, it made me feel like I was there in the crowd or something lol.

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  4. I really enjoyed reading your story, I can tell you put a lot of thought into it and it is well put together. Definitely was exciting to read, I liked how descriptive you were about the place and feelings it brought out, it made me feel like I was there in the crowd or something lol.

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  5. You are right--moments like these are "special and will not be forgotten." What a great experience for you, being a part of such a close-knit group and getting to travel and play for "people who love drums and cheer for eveything they do."

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  6. Good morning, Riley,
    I've had lots of friends in Marching Band and I've heard legendary stories about Drum Line. I'm certain it is an unforgettable experience every competition, and I'm happy you get to experience it.
    Have a lovely night,
    Zachary

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