Riley Brown
Mrs. Fraser
Creative Writing
27 August 2015
The
WGI Patch
The
whole season has lead up to this moment.
Some of the members are getting anxious, some are getting excited for
world championships. As we all walk to
down the tunnel into the University of Dayton arena we are in quite
anticipation of what is going to happen when we step out on that floor. As we get to the bottom of the steep tunnel
the drumline all gathers into one big circle.
We pray for a good performance, and no matter what the score is, we pray
we have fun. After the prayer everyone
is exchanging hugs with each other, congratulating them on the season. As the seniors and the parents get emotional
so does the rest of the line because we know that this is the last time that
this specific line will march together.
We hear the sounds of the group preceding ours drums cease, and the
cheers that follow. We start to push the
equipment on to the floor, and see the arena from the floor. The arena is bright and the stands are packed,
and the nervous excitement sets in even more.
Performing the show for that big of an audience is such a rush it is
hard to remember some of the details, but the drumline did well and had fun,
and that’s all that matters.
After
getting all the equipment out of the arena and back to our bus the members
ecstatic. Performing for a crowd that
loves drums and cheers for everything they do, was one of the best experiences
of our lives, and even though we still have to go through the hassle of trying
to pack every marimba, vibraphone, and xylophone on to one bus we all know that
these moments are special, and will not be forgotten.
The
fun is not over though, after packing everything up we go back for the finals
retreat, which is where every drumline that participated gets together and
waits to be called out on to the floor, for the second time, to receive their
placement and plaque. As we stand in a
line at the beginning of the tunnel we went down not a few hours before the
mood is all changed, everyone is excited and happy and ready to get down the
tunnel and walk out on the floor again. As
our name is called we all walk down the tunnel together until we get to the
same spot where we had our prayer, and continue on to the floor. The arena is dark now, with two spotlights
going around the arena, occasionally shinning on some of us, as we walk to the
place where the drumline stands in a single file line with all the other
drumlines to receive their placement.
The process of building up every groups score before actually saying it
takes a long time, especially with fifteen groups that made it to finals, but
once the announcer says ninth place everyone perks up because that’s what we
had got the year before. We get excited
now because the announcer has said Kickapoo got eighth in the world. Everyone
is happy we at least did better than the last year and our captains go up and
receive the award.
After
we get back we all get finalist patches to put on jackets or whatever we want,
and every time I see mine I’m happy I got experience those amazing times. It was one of the best experiences of my
life.

I absolutely love the drum line. It is interesting to hear how someone who actually plays in it, feels about it. I never knew how much hard work and emotion goes into the drum line. This was very interesting and I learned a lot. Thank You.
ReplyDeleteHello, Riley! I can definitely relate with the having to stuff instruments onto a bus. When we have Orchestra contests, it's a huge hassle to pack the basses and cellos. Love that you remember the spot you prayed in, the first time. I often walk or drive past a place that reminds me of something dear to my heart. Eighth in the World is a huge deal! Congratulations! I'm very proud of our Kickapoo drumline and I look forward to seeing what great things they do in the future. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your story, I can tell you put a lot of thought into it and it is well put together. Definitely was exciting to read, I liked how descriptive you were about the place and feelings it brought out, it made me feel like I was there in the crowd or something lol.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your story, I can tell you put a lot of thought into it and it is well put together. Definitely was exciting to read, I liked how descriptive you were about the place and feelings it brought out, it made me feel like I was there in the crowd or something lol.
ReplyDeleteYou are right--moments like these are "special and will not be forgotten." What a great experience for you, being a part of such a close-knit group and getting to travel and play for "people who love drums and cheer for eveything they do."
ReplyDeleteGood morning, Riley,
ReplyDeleteI've had lots of friends in Marching Band and I've heard legendary stories about Drum Line. I'm certain it is an unforgettable experience every competition, and I'm happy you get to experience it.
Have a lovely night,
Zachary