Spooky Comments

I read Ben LeMon's post from Tuesday

Hello there friend,
I loved this story, it had almost everything that makes a story great.  A good hook, interesting plot twists and a great ending.  I liked how the story went full circle from beginning to end. I like the puns and how much Jason Seagull meant to the gang.  Overall it was a great story and I loved it, well done.
Sincerely Riley

I also read his Harris Burdick Story

Hey there,
Firstly the last line was great, animal puns always get me.  Also I liked how many times you used time puns throughout the story.  I liked how the beginning kind of elaborates on Rico's past and how he lived with velociraptors, that was awesome. It's too bad he had to leave his brethren.  All in all another great Rico story. Keep 'em coming
Riley

And lastly I read his Edward Hopper piece

Hello Again,
You have done it again. Tens across the board for this one.  I loved the humor, and how it switched perspective from first person to third person at random times. I also really liked the intro and how it was like a old time TV show. Also I liked the detail on how Rico was looking that day.  Great work man.
Riley

I also read some of Daniels posts

Hey,
Most of the answers for your questions are really good and relatable.  I really like you answer for the first question, because I like getting up early too.  There is something about being awake when no one else is that is kind of peaceful.  Good stuff.
Riley

Hello,
This story was great.  Rico and Kermit should get together more often.  It is too bad that Chip had to die, but a story of this proportion had to have some casualties.  I understand.  I am also glad that they brought back Owl Pichino and expect to see more from the once dead owl. Great work.
Riley

Hi,
I really liked this poem.  I liked how it is not you average every day poem about deep stuff but it is a funny poem about two people and a chicken.  I liked how each stanza was in a different characters perspective.  As always, great job.
Riley